英语四级六级培训课程

雅思写作范本

时间:2022-1-24 作者:洪恩少儿英语

小作文 :柱状图,84年、94年、04年,the bar chart shows the rating of five factors for a good manager in three separate years.

写作思路: 动态图表,根据时间顺序描述趋势,根据factor的顺序做对比。

大作文 :Some people think all lawbreakers should be taken into prison, others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

写作思路:

第一段: 假如对待罪犯:监狱还是其他手段?

第二段: 监狱有哪些用途

1. 保证社会安全

2. 警示他人

但:耗费资源多,罪犯出狱后难以重新进入社会

第三段: 其他手段包括教育,职业培训,工作

1. 可以帮出狱后经济独立,预防重复犯罪

2. 认识到自己对社会的价值,提升自尊自信

第四段: 我不不承认监狱有哪些用途,但假如没教育和工作的帮忙,罪犯难以彻底得到改造。

As repeated crimes occur increasingly, how to reform criminals has given rise to a debate. Certainly prison is the place for them to be punished and reformed. But other measures are also needed to achieve an optimal result for them and the society as well.

It is undeniable that putting criminals into prison would contribute to a lower crime rate.Primarily, as offenders are isolated from the society when they are in prison, they cannot threaten the social security any more. Longer prison term would also be a serious warning forpotential criminals However, this way of punishment means that more prisons and man power as well as other resources are required, which can be a huge cosplayt for the government. Besides, after being isolated from the society for a really long time, offenders would find it very hard to re-entrythe society and this may force them to commit crime again.

Hence, it is better to find alternative ways to deal with criminals. Vocational training and academic education aimed at prisoners are promising ones. These measures could help equip those behind bars with job skills and become independent economically after they are set free. They would find the opportunity to escape the cycle of violence and poverty utterly. For those criminals with special talents, working is a better way to reform them because they may have chance to realize their value to the society and regain self-respect and self-confidence. Theseapproaches would make a difference in criminal rehabilitation, and generate a better effect than simply throwing offenders behind the iron bars.

Overall, I do not deny the function of prison in punishing felons and deterring crime. However this cannot turn them into law abiding members without the aid of other measures, such as education, training and working.

词语拓展:

1. occur 发生

2. reform 改造

3. given rise to 引起

4. optimal 最好的

5. undeniable 不能否认的

6. crime rate 犯罪率

7. contribute to 致使

8. Primarily 主要的是

9. Offender= those behind bars= felon 罪犯

10. Isolate 隔离

11. prison term 刑期

12. security 安全

13. warn 敬告

14. potential 潜在的,可能的

15. re-entry 重新进入

16. commit crime 犯罪

17. law abiding 遵守法律

18. alternative 其他的

19. deal with 应付

20. Vocational training 职业教育

21. promising 有期望的

22. measure 手段

23. set free 释放

24. escape 逃脱

25. cycle 循环

26. utterly 彻底地

27. regain 重新获得

28. approach 办法

29. make a difference 有用途

30. rehabilitation 改过迁善

31. generate 产生

32. deter 阻止

33. turn …into 把…变成

34. Hence 因此

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